neki za angleščino…….pomagite plis!
ali sem prav napisala??!
…čao!
I’m MAJA. I have brown hair and brown eyes.
I’ve 11 years old and I visit 7/9 in first shool Žalec. I have one sister. Her name is Katja and she has 12 years old. I usualy go to the cinema.I like travels. My family got 3 dogs and 3 cats and one tourtle and one bird. the dogs name is …..,….and…
the cats name is …,……,…..
I always watch tv. My favourite month is december because my birthday is on 13. december. In my free time I have(visit?) tennis, dance, germany, french and synthesiser. I like pop music. I like swimming and eisskating (smučanje). My favourite colour is blue and red. I like sea. I sometimes go with my parents and sister in differents country.
prosim preglejte mi…..pa pomagite…napisati še bolj izčrpno.
napisati moram en list predstavitve sebe…
kaj še naj napišem??
prosim če lahko to do jutri??!
hvala
My name is MAJA. I have brown hair and brown eyes. I’m 11 years old and I’m visiting seven class of primary school in Žalec.
I have only a sister. Her name is Katja and she is older than me, she is 12 years old. She also has brown hair and brown eyes but she is bigger than me. We often go to the cinema because I adore films. Most of all I like animals, at home we have 3 dogs, 3 cats, tourtle and a bird. the smaller dog is Runo, the medium is Sultan and the bigger is Tarzan. They are very cute and they never beating cats. The blac cat is Micka, the grey is Luna and the wite is Samanta. For animals the most care my mother, she feeds them and goes for walk with dogs. When is weather sunny My daddy, my sister and I join her.
I like watching TV, but my parents don’t like that. They prefer if I reading or studding for school. In my free time I play tennis, I visit dance classes and learn German and french language. I play synthesiser and I love pop music. I like swimming and skiing, I like see and snow.
I also like traveling, I was in several foreign countries with my parents and sister.
My favourite month is december because my birthday is on 13. december. My favourite colours are blue and red.
Upam, da bo tako boljše. Lp
Še malo dodatnih popravkov. Far from perfect, ampak vsaj tahude smo spucal. ;))
LP
My name is MAJA. I have brown hair and brown eyes. I’m 11 years old and
I’m the attending seventh grade of the primary school in Žalec.
I only have one sister. Her name is Katja and she is older than me, she is 12 years old. She also has brown hair and brown eyes but she is taller than me. We often go to the cinema together because I love films. Most of all I like animals, at home we have 3 dogs, 3 cats, a tourtle and a bird. The smaller dog’s name is Runo, the medium is called Sultan and the biggest one is called Tarzan. They are very cute and they never chase around the cats. The black cat’s name is Micka, the grey cat is called Luna and the white is called Samanta. The animals are mostly taken care of by my mother, who feeds them and also walks the dogs. When the weather is nice, my daddy, my sister and I join her.
I like watching TV, but my parents don’t. They prefer if I read or do schoolwork. In my free time I play tennis, I have dance classes and I’m also learning German and French. I play synthesiser and I love pop music. I like swimming and skiing, I like both the sea and snow.
I also like travelling, I have been to several foreign countries together with my parents and sister.
My favourite month is December because my birthday is on the 13th of December. My favourite colours are blue and red.
@Mojca, drugič se take pomoči sama loti. Takšnih “pametnih” nasvetov nihče ne potrebuje.:)) Sploh dva meseca zatem ne. Naj tudi tebi velja za naprej. 😉
@Popravek: Joj, itak.
Ja, no sm pač študirana in mi gre na živce, ko vsi v Sloveniji mislijo, da znajo angleško. Pač sem mail videla prepozno, ce ne bi pomagala. Tistim pa, ki mislijo, da znajo angleško (verjetno si ti med njimi) pa sam to, prej si poglejte kaksno slovnico, ker temu dekletu slaba pomoč ze ni koristila. Je cisto vseeno, ce bi svoje oddala.
Ja no, pač nisi edina “študirana”, niti ne edina s tega področja (PS: si se zadovoljila z diplomo ali študiraš dalje?), zato mirno trdim, da nimaš prav. Za dekličine potrebe je bilo že prvič čisto ok popravljeno, drugič pa sploh.
Če pa bi srčno rada lektorirala kak poslovni dopis, si moraš pa kje drugje poiskati delo. Čeprav boš imela težave, kajti za profesionalne lekture najemajo “študirane” (kvalificirane) domače govorce jezika. :))
PS: Meni gredo pa prepotentni ljudje občasno na živce.
In kdo je tu prepotenten???
Ce nisis opazila, sem skritizirala le prvo pomoc, druga je bila ok. Z zaposlitvijo nimam tezav, saj sem sposobna in mi tudi zafrustrirani ljudje, kot si ti, ne pridejo do zivega.
Najprej se nauci brat in uporabljat forum, potem pa se oglasaj. Ocitno rabis nekoga, da te malo pomiri, glede na to, da kar ‘bruhas’ po forumu. Komentar pa ni bil namenjen tebi, temvec Lizi. Mislim, da se lahko ona tud sama brani in ne rabi ‘mamice’. Zato se pocasi umiri.
LP
osebno napadanje mi ni v navadi in se ti za to opravicujem.
kar sem hotela napisati, je samo tole: pri teh forumih na splosno opazam, da se na tistega enega, ki je skusal pomagati, hitreje spravi deset drugih s kritikami te pomoci kot pa z lastno
zdaj pa predlagam, da zakljuciva, da ne bo kdo (upraviceno) jezen zaradi tele skrenitve s teme. :))
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